tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039670737739959567.post5249496772091810084..comments2023-05-11T18:40:10.140+07:00Comments on by David Barron: Fight SceneAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12701186474452272514noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039670737739959567.post-38871678720836821442010-11-25T06:42:08.508+07:002010-11-25T06:42:08.508+07:00I'm envisioning an epic battle for succession ...I'm envisioning an epic battle for succession amongst the Tooth Fairy's heirs. "It's a power cavity!"/"Oh no! Sugar masses upon the frontier!"Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12701186474452272514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039670737739959567.post-5793410307434510432010-11-25T00:13:44.708+07:002010-11-25T00:13:44.708+07:00I'd say about a paragraph per battle is all yo...I'd say about a paragraph per battle is all you need for any fight scene, whether it's World War Eleventy-Sexteen or two chicks brawling over their man. I like to hear something like, "and the intestines sizzled in the fire," or, "the tooth clattered off the mantlepiece;" I'm pro-gorey fights. But that doesn't change the fact that, in every case of a fight scene, what comes next is better.<br /><br />But especially in the case of my second example. Time to write that story!Ben Godbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15450579203940093977noreply@blogger.com